WATERPROOF CARGO BAG

Brilliant proof-readers assist me in check the following e-mail for accuracy plz?

Dear Mr. Bon,
Am I correct in assuming that the practice of using cargo nets for lifting garbage bags at the barge loading area will be lasting for one month later. I can understand your point completely but after discussions with my supervisor, we must inform that this operation have been reviewed and is considered unsafe.
Therefore, basically telling you to find other methods for carrying the garbage bags and the utilization of cargo nets must be discontinued as of today’s date 13th February, 2009.

If you send this and he does not have an alternative way to lift the garbage bags, what will happen to the garbage until he finds an alternative?

Dear Mr. Bon,

It is not acceptable for your practice of using cargo nets for lifting garbage bags at the barge loading area to continue for even one more day. The practice must stop immediately.

I can understand your point completely, but after discussions with my supervisor, we must inform you that this operation has been reviewed and has been determined to be unreasonably dangerous.

For this reason, the practice of using cargo nets to transport garbage bags must end effective as of today’s date, 13 February 2009.

You need to immediately find a safe method for carrying the garbage bags.

If you have any questions or feedback, please refer them to the General Management Dept.

Regards,
Hai